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Wednesday 23 September 2015

Treatment For Our Short Film

A schoolgirl aged 16 is having a relationship with a married, middle-aged man. On one specific day she leaves school to see him parked around the corner. She gets into the car and they head over to his house. His wife is not home so they have a glass of wine and then head to the sauna. While in the sauna she tells him she is pregnant. He says he just has to go and get a towel in an awkward manner. He leaves the sauna to turn up the temperature. She looked at the temperature gauge on the side of the sauna and realised it was well over what it should be. She began to panic. Whilst the girl was in the sauna the man was preparing the body bag for the girl. In the sauna she has fainted due to the high temperature. An hour later her motionless dead body lies in the sauna. The man returns to the sauna and turns down the heat. He then goes inside and picks up her body and puts it into the bag and leaves it on the floor in the sauna.


The wife returns after a long day in the office. She is greeted by her husband who is seemingly more affectionate with her than in the morning. He pours them both a glass of wine. She refuses hers, She tells him she is pregnant. His reaction is of pure joy. She then says that he needs to stop that affair with that schoolgirl. He is dumbfounded. He agrees to stop it and says that it never meant anything. She suggests that they both go into the sauna. He says it is not a good idea.

1 comment:

  1. Well developed treatment. Good twist at the end, befitting its format.

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