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Thursday 17 September 2015

Preliminary Story Idea

She was only a 16 year old school girl and he was a 38 year old man. When she is walking to get the bus to school she sees him across the road in a car, they had arranged to see each other that evening but she could not let this opportunity go amiss. She ran across the road. She shouts out his name.  He invites her back to his house. He comes into the room with a cup of tea for each of them when they are back at his house. The man begins to explain how he can no longer see her. He says his wife is getting more suspicious. In a quick mode of panic the girl says she is pregnant. She will try anything to save this relationship. Something this special can't be split up. Suddenly the blood drains from the mans face, then as quickly as it went it came back again. He lashes out at the girl with a forceful punch. She doubles over on the ground, letting out a screech in pain. She asks the man why he did that, what about the baby? . He continues hitting her at every opportunity until she is out cold.  There is no chance of her waking up now. He picks up the girl and puts her over his shoulder. He walks upstairs and a thump is heard. He put her lifeless body in the loft and then returns to his bedroom to change his clothes. Just after he is finished changing he hears the door shut downstairs. Hi wife has returned from work. He heads downstairs to see her. She is looking at his phone. There was a text on there from the girl which she sent earlier in the day. His wife turns with a calm expression on her face and says that he has to end his childish affair with the girl. He agrees, little does his wife know that the girl is no longer a problem. A smile spreads across the wife face as she tells him that she is pregnant, they had been trying for months.

1 comment:

  1. An excellent idea that would suit the constraints of the format well.

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