Misconception Rough Cut

The first point i want to bring up in this rough cut is when Eliza goes to open the car door. It is slightly out of time between the match on action shots which is something we need to rectify going into the next cut. I also think that in the car it could also be made lighter as the scene is quite dark however this adds to the mood of the film which is good. The next scene i want to address is when the couple are entering the apartment. Firstly this shot is slightly out of focus however this was the only shot we did from this angle. I believe the main problem with this is that the lighting is slightly to dark so it will need to be brightened within premiere pro for our next cut. In the handheld which follows the couple downstairs i think that the camera is shaky to begin with. We need to adjust the length of this shot in accordance with another angle shot on a tripod to increase the quality of the film at this point. Moving on to the first shot of the couple in the sauna i think that the scene could be made slightly brighter however this could cause the film to become slightly grainy. When Nathan comes upstairs and turns on the speakers we need to add in the music which we recorded in the apartment. Moving to when Nathan's hiding the body and he runs upstairs, we need to add in a sound of the buzzer going off as Lily enters the building. After this has been done we need to add in a title sequence for the film.